Topic: Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
The matter of noise has been brought up as a controversial issue in modern society. Some people suppose the idea that noise should be controlled strictly in some areas while others think that it is normal to produce as much noise as they want.
On the one hand, proponents claim that there should be a strict law to control the use of noise due to its detrimental effects. First and foremost, loud noise affects the efficiency and effectiveness of employees and students. Workplaces and schools need to be kept away from loud noise settings since the people there need their own private zone to concentrate on their tasks or to be creative. In fact, students in a school will be affected adversely if there is a local market nearby due to the constant arguing, selling and bargaining sound there. Moreover, having suffered from loud noise for a long time can cause some serious diseases such as a migraine or a chronic headache. Especially, children and the elderly find it very irritated if they have to listen to loud hard-rock music, yelling or crying sound. Therefore, due to its harmful influence on our lives, governments should enact a law to manage the sound that human create.
On the other hand, opponents cling to the idea that they can make as much noise as they want since they are living in a modern culture where noise is an essential factor. In fact, noise is a symbol of industrialized countries; therefore, it is used to carry on society’s development. In some nations, it is obvious that the use of music or advertising on streets, public transports, shopping malls or restaurants attracts many consumers. Moreover, people also believe that they have the right to make as much sound as they want if only it is legal. For example, in Vietnam, citizens are allowed to sing karaoke before 11 pm, so they have the right to play whatever they like before midnight no matter what their neighbors think.
In conclusion, although producing noise is within human’s right and it also brings good outcomes, noise should be forbidden for people’s safety and work efficiency. People should make the suitable sound at the right occasions to benefit it the best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87935656836 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70718810834 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538873994638 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5434500957 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345672122396 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109064845651 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11801472171 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234461272726 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11360111967 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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