TOPIC: Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Road to successes are always fulfilled with abrupt obstacles and uphill struggles; therefore, some people suppose that luck is absolutely an imperative driving force for most successes. In my perspectives, luck is undoubtedly vital, yet not every achievement is derived from it.
On the one hand, a question of luck is a key to successes. An apparent merit of luck is, literally, foundation. Whereas some people are born in impoverishment, others are born in wealth with top-notch educational background which influences strongly in shaping the personality and mindset, thereby increasing the likelihood of achieving the goals. Moreover, luck often saves people from predicaments. Actually, everything will not transpire in the way it was planned before. In those situations, luck would ease the seriousness of the problems, sometimes even lead to surprising triumphs.
On the other hand, seldom has the luck proven its values so there are some other factors bringing people brilliant successes. First and foremost, determination is a crucial dignity. Without it, people are unlikely to be resilient, thereby easily succumbing to troublesome circumstances, which means they have failed to achieve their goals. Intrinsically, determination trains people to be diligent and persistent against temptation, thus shortening the roads to successes indirectly. Besides, experience is also an invaluable factor. Even though experience takes time and effort to accrue, its value is indisputable, as with experience, people are able to have plausible strategies against things which pose a threat to the rate of being successful.
In recapitulate, luck contributes to building up a successful person, yet most successes are dependent on numerous other factors. Luck can never determine the entire life of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65441176471 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18904103124 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.9395528846 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116979838371 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408363446673 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345337248532 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795145021756 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248642367298 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.