Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism bring to individuals and society?
Tourism is industry which is increase dramatically and it is maintaining for a long time. In my opinion, this essay will discuss the profit which society and citizen receive from vacation industry.
First of all, the most thing society is received by travel industry that reduce unemployment. Tourism industry develop and it bring a lot of opportunities to the citizen who live there. When a number of visitors travel to the province of the country, the province needs the amount of labor who can service the visitor. The servicer such as; guard, chef, bartender, etc. The people live in the province will have job and reduce employment. For example, Phu Quoc island will open a casino in 2020. the citizen lives there will receive a wide range of job from the casino because the casino needs a lot of staffs service the customers.
In one hand, the citizen live in the area in which tourism will booming receive a lot of chances if they have a vision. They can open a store or open a small business to provide a special food in that area. Furthermore, they build a stall in the mega mall to sell the product which suitable for temperature in the province. For instance, citizen in Da Lat city apply successfully and gain lots of advantages from tourism. They build a number of stalls in the Da Lat market to sell rice paper which is a special food in Da lat.
To sum up, the citizen and economy of the country will receive the amount of profit from the tourism industry. It helps the citizen get a job and increasing economic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'boom'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64233576642 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51079241152 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481751824818 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6483887164 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101843251979 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385131963504 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481683190847 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777450686019 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028404095228 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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