The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is dissappearing. What are the reason and what are the impacts?
Recently, people become more busy and having meals together among family members is vanishing. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and this can lead to some negative impacts.
On the one hand, there are two primary reasons why people more likely spend less time to have meals with their family. One reason is that people are swept into maelstrom of work and study. They have to work hard, spend more time on working in oder to get promotion, this will help them earn more money and have higher standard of living. However, this means that they have not enough time to prepare and eat meals with their family. For instance, employees have lunch in workplace and because of working overtime, they often eat fast food instead of having dinner with family. Another reason is that many people usually dine out with their colleagues and friends. Having dinner in restaurant with clients, partners is the common way to sign contract or cooperate. Besides, dining out with friends also help them relax and release stress after a long day working.
On the other hand, this phenomenon can have some negative influences. Firstly, family bonds may be lossen. Meals is the time family member chat together, share many things in their daily life, this can help people become closer. Without time with family, the appreciation of family values may decline. Secondly, eating food alone may increase isolation. Because of hectic life, people sit in front of desk for hours, not enough time to socialize. As a result, peole more likely suffer from depression, stress, boring and some psychological disorder.
In conclusion, following the process of mordenization, some reasons may lead to spending less time with family and this also have disastrous influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04109589041 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36257689034 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7155407643 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7777777778 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118357248953 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044384725624 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360453419458 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087719494764 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228511799879 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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