Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?
In the era of urbanization, real estate and traffic congestion have become head-aching issues. To address
this phenomenon, the relocation of enterprises and manufacturing factories in rural areas emerges as a justifiable measure. While it can solve the problem to some extent, there are other alternate approaches.
To begin with, the reconstruction strategy achieves certain results in overcoming traffic jams and housing shortages. Phasing out sizeable factories enable an increase in population with fixed abode. By knocking down blocks of buildings constructed for business purposes, more space is designated for skyrocketing apartments that accommodate a staggering number of residents. In addition to accelerating amount of homeowners, the solution alleviates burdens on traffic. As traffic congestion stems from the abundance of commuters, the shift in massive companies' locations results in fewer participants in the traffic in cities. Moreover, changes in workplaces' addresses forge a surge in social welfare. The less money spent on updating traffic infrastructures, the more governmental budget distributed to those in need.
However, there are alternatives available that end up in the fruit as opulent as that of moving factories to the suburbs. To be more specific, one straightforward method of which is advancing living conditions in remote areas, such as mountainous regions with hostile climatic characteristics. With the emergence of modern basic amenities and necessary facilities adopted in secluded parts of the world, a host of citizens are lured away from home and settle down in new homes. Therefore, a major slip in metropolitans' population will become the case.
In conclusion, the avenue of relocating influential firms in the countryside contributes to the decline of traffic and housing problems to some degree, but other effective solutions should not be neglected.
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- Face to face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters email or telephone calls Do you agree or disagree with the following statement 61
- Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies factories and their employees to the countryside Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve become head-aching issues. To address this phenomenon, the relocation of enter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72791519435 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29120788543 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657243816254 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2671924258 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178422353037 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491729187811 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04456018291 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890965736717 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447560496379 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.