Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the capacity of the universities to accept students, should be roughly divided between males and females. I strongly disagree because, acceptance of equal number of males and females would cause another problem.
It is conceivable that male students who are capable to continue their educations are not roughly equal to female students. For example, in 2010, the number of boys who got able to choose their future disciplines and universities are bigger than girls. If this law had taken place in that year, some boys despite their marks, would have forfeited. Notably, scientists could not discover any significant association between gender and educating abilities. In this regard, this kind of suggestion could deprive students to follow their dreams. Beside this, the demand for some disciplines is not equal among males and females. Hence, this law could not have a contribution to mitigate the gender inequity. For instance, mining engineering has generally higher demand among males than females and it would be unfair that some boys cannot apply by virtue of extra designation to girls.
According to this, universities should accept students regardless their gender by considering their abilities and ambitions. In my opinion, the vision of equity between male and female should be declared precisely to lead the society to a fairer place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34101382488 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67038663284 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562211981567 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.480600866 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.5833333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232141850575 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927174098022 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814039242419 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201427545504 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781204941051 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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