University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Students of universities tend to focus on their major course, but a certain number of people are of an opinion that students need to be encouraged to study additional subjects as well as their main subject. I disagree with this belief because it is challenging to focus on different subjects and it takes a lot of time, which can be spent on extracurricular activities. In the following essay, I will explain my point of view, using my personal experience and examples from real life.
Studying several subjects may be difficult, so adding some subjects to the program can cause stress and tiredness. For example, my Advanced Biology course requires skimming hundreds of pages of material. Moreover, lots of subjects consist of not only theoretical material but also some practical or laboratory work. That is why adding some minor subjects is very stressful and exhausting.
Besides, it takes additional time, while students need to relax and have fun with their friends. It is well-known that students desire to spend their life in university not only with books and lectures but also with their friends and hobbies. Students can spend their time doing sport or initiating some art projects, as well as making some volunteer work since it can develop their personality and other important skills.
Taking everything into consideration, I believe that focusing on one special subject is vital for a student since it will make him or her happier and give the opportunity to spend time wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08906882591 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76892888475 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.862069768 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.272727273 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392912217463 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141301512353 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114357268323 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219438048591 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726011967427 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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