University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
With advancement of globalization, every aspect of education has altered. While some proponents argue that studying abroad can be a positive method, I believe that this trend would bring some negative repercussions in the future.
It is undeniable that studying in other country present a variety of merits. Firstly, students are likely to obtain more likelihood when it comes to workforce since a great number of companies tend to look for applicants with experiences in foreign country. According to recent research, 7 out of 10 global corporations in Canada insist that future employees who studied abroad contribute to development of their business. Furthermore, students might broaden their horizons by learning other languages and cultures. To be specific, they will have an opportunity to mingle with peers from all over the world, which means they acquire different types of lifestyles.
However, it is universally accepted that attending other country’s university provide a diversity of demerits. First and foremost, it will be financial burden to parents who support the students as studying abroad requires a great deal of money. In particular, nowadays tuition fees and renting house fees are significantly expensive. Secondly, the student’s health status could decrease because they get huge stress from living unfamiliar country. The majority of students who are studying abroad in China, for instance, suffer from simple disease such as headaches and stomachaches due to homesick. Because of this, the society may gain higher suicide rates, especially among such students with severe emotional destruction, according to some studies associated with social science.
In conclusion, studying in foreign country will create various advantages, I contend that it will play a negative role including economical and health problem in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65602836879 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97942620888 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1934408306 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24523769385 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780009204226 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620931862195 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131848475942 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575964768311 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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