University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
In the past century academic studies became important, therefore lots of youngsters try to study abroad for higher education. Although, I believe that the positives will overcome the negative side of the topic, but there are lots of difficulties. In this essay the advantages and drawbacks of this issue will be discussed.
Having a PhD position, getting an internship or exchanging students are some the ways for who wants to learn abroad. The greatest benefit is coping with several cultures and learning writing, speaking and reading new language. living in another country push to learn how to survive in a different situation. For instance, my sister immigrated to a cold country from a warm one, which caused getting cold for several weeks just when she arrived, though she understood the living conditions there now to survive. another positive point is becoming international person that will help in finding a job in the future. Moreover, the wage increases because the positions are enough vast to choose the best one.
On the other hand, the major disadvantage can be cost of living. Many of student are self-funded, while they hope to find a part time job to earn some money. Hiring to a job needs to know the host country language and most of students cannot find one due to weak communication ability. These costs consist of room rent, travel, food, and tuition fees. The second one is struggling with new culture and if you cannot bear the host culture, it is inevitable to leave that country.
In conclusion, there are lots of cons and pros however, the positives overweigh the bad features. studying abroad broadens the mindset horizon and helps to be more self-confident in future life. I, myself, absolutely agree with this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to write'.
Suggestion: to write
...ping with several cultures and learning writing, speaking and reading new language. liv...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...living conditions there now to survive. another positive point is becoming internationa...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... self-funded, while they hope to find a part time job to earn some money. Hiring to a job...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...s to know the host country language and most of students cannot find one due to weak communicati...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Studying
...e positives overweigh the bad features. studying abroad broadens the mindset horizon and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04452054795 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68850012702 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647260273973 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9117523168 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156374857508 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410489800174 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614070485508 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924446676455 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420185120045 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.