University students nowadays have too much freedom and do not study enough. To what extent do you agree and disagree? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and examples.
Some people insists that students in universities are not spending enough time on their studies and having too much leisure time. It seems that they are wasting their time, but they are truly struggling to get a job or to success in the cut-throat world. This essay totally disagree with the opinion that university students are not studying and will discuss why this situation is happening.
It is undeniable that people in universities are putting much time to do something else, such as part-time jobs, unpaid internships and club activities, instead of putting their all energy on the studies. One of the major reasons is because companies require lots of experience as well as GPA. In the past the only thing that requirements to get a job was good marks in classes. However, since society have been competitive, applicants are required to do extra activities to fill their resumes to get a decent job.
Furthermore, universities also encourage students to do non-academic activities and recreational activities to make them mentally and physically healthy, which end up leading them to get a satisfying job, and they do not allow students to graduate if they do not have any extra experiences. Nowadays, more companies want to employ the one who is mentally stable and can successfully communicate with colleagues, which means they no longer only require high scores(A and A+). Hence, students have had to do volunteering and work out to make their portfolio. For instance, Seoul National University have let students submit their portfolio to graduate.
To sum up, even if it seems that they are not studying enough compared to past students, it is because current students are required to do extra activities by companies and schools. They are actually doing both studying and non-academic things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14527027027 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87162758346 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7081484641 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247687374778 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926418570409 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652560638325 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156827355375 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320517967116 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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