The technological and economical advancement of the world has given public the option of travelling in their own choice of vehicles, especially cars, with amazing features you could have never imagined before. Some people believe the increasing number of vehicles on the roads would lead to many adverse ramifications. This essay will identify traffic jams as one of the biggest issues to be addressed and agrees that discouraging the use of personal automobiles as the most viable solution.
Traffic jams are one of the main concerns in all the major cities. In order for them to travel conveniently, almost all the people in populated areas use their own vehicles. This has resulted in having millions of cars using the roads inefficiently since only one person is utilizing a single-vehicle, making the motorways packed. This issue affects not only as a waste of time but also it barricades emergency services such as ambulances or fire trucks. New York, for instance, is a prime example being one of the top congested cities, where more than 80% of commuter use their cars to travel.
As a solution, I think it is a good approach to persuade the population using fewer cars and to promote public transport. Firstly, increasing charges for parking slots would be an effective method to demotivate commuters to use cars on a daily basis. It would make the realize it is not cost-effective to travel in their vehicles when there are lots of cheaper options available. Secondly, imposing taxes for automobiles with unutilized seats is another proven method to be used in populated areas. This will help cities to curb their motorway congestion ratios while helping taxi services. For example, Japan initiated this method in 2010 and it has positively affected their highways.
In conclusion, it is true that more and more vehicle usage may become a challenge to the public. However, this can be suppressed successfully with high charges in parking slots and levying high taxes will be effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06363636364 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82654510108 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0907251923 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134487404498 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457673538436 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460506208797 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771818924995 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405305124872 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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