Water pollution has become an increasing problem over the past few decades.
What causes water pollution?
How can we prevent this problem?
During recent decades, water contamination has become a major problem and one that is challenging to rectify. This is mainly because of human activities and industrial waste. This essay will analyse the causes and potential remedies for this issue.
Probably the main factor is toxic emissions from industrial factories, human activities and different means of transportation. In other words, emissions contain pollutant particles that can contaminate water run-off and thus enter the water cycle by transferring through the water table into aquifers. In addition, human activities that generate domestic sewage and toxic waste can also cause water pollution by contaminating water with disease-causing microorganisms and poisonous substances. As a result, the water table becomes tainted and unusable for a variety of activities. This can be exacerbated by logging resulting in soil erosion, where soil, pesticides and fertilisers are washed into streams and waterways. Therefore, sedimentation and pollution will disrupt freshwater and marine habitats. Another contributing factor is the deliberate or accidental dumping of waste products outside controlled landfills or waste processing centres. To exemplify this, when waste including synthetic textiles and tyres are disposed of in random areas, microplastics are produced and are able to enter water supplies through the ground and often undetected. Consequently, the reduced size of microplastic waste makes it easier to reach water and amass noxious wastes, hence reducing the quality of water.
Regarding potential solutions, probably the main remedy would be to install a wastewater treatment plant that aims to remove as many suspended solids as possible from wastewater before being discharged back into the environment. One piece of evidence for this is that Switzerland is known to have the cleanest tap water in the world because of its advanced water treatment system. Another solution is recycling, where people reduce the total mass of waste they produce. If innovative ways of recycling are introduced into the public recycling program, then people will be encouraged to recycle and reduce waste output. The best example that shows the benefits of recycling is Germany, where it has been able to reduce its total waste by 1 million tons every year. Therefore, both the government and individuals can take initiative in resolving such an issue.
In conclusion, human activities and industrial establishments have contributed to the rise of water contamination. However, various measures can be taken by the government and the public to reduce waste and toxic substances which can harm the water and marine animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rectifying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: rectifying
...jor problem and one that is challenging to rectify. This is mainly because of human activi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60442260442 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99910943081 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560196560197 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8041093963 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.05 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.35 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250799369391 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752495504474 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677188582153 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153718691048 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687980970001 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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