Water scarcity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this?And what solutions can be done by individuals and the government?
In many parts of the world, water crisis has become alarmingly serious. There are many forces that foster the consistency of this problem which can be analysed and addressed separately. This essay will present an overview of causes and potential solutions to this phenomenon.
Firstly, it is note-worthy that climate change is widely perceived as the main reason. Nowadays, many scientific studies have shown that although it is invisible, global warming has silently resulted in effects on environment on large scale. For example, according to the survey conducted by BBC News, the growth of climate shift is proportional to the increasing number of disasters like desertification, persistent drought and low precipitation. Secondly, another factor that has added fuel to the fire is the ever-growing population. According to demographic researches, the growth of population is accompanied by the seriousness of water shortage. For instance, because of high demand for water consumption for domestic usage and agriculture, underground water systems have been excessively exploited. As a result, water resources are running out.
In tackling this problem, some effective and feasible measures should be adopted by governments. To be specific, governments and authorities should strictly prohibit the emission of gases that are causing greenhouse gas effect. Besides, the best approach to tackle this problem is to focus on advanced technological benefits. In other words, improved sewage treatment system, recycling water by using modern services with technological devices have been conducted to save limited water resources.
In conclusion, climate change and the rapid population growth are the main reasons. In tackling the matter, governments play the active role as mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lay the active role as mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7265917603 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07776762688 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5630296576 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242659698431 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071524979255 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611585093945 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143171753892 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105882009903 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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