Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government, rather than private companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In 21st century, it can be seen that research has become essential for all over the world now. Moreover, many of the countries have muscular economy on the basis of research in which Australia, Canada, Germany and many others are included.
Firstly, I think research is the best way to find something new that redundant to country’s economy reach at a peak. Therefore, it helps to improve the countries services and treatment on several significant areas that could eventually helpful for future generation. Additionally, it may also help for producing jobs, business and ancient things which can be known by the name of country. However, Government should take the responsibility and controlled all the research whether it is private or any other. Although, Government must give the platform and entice to students and private sectors for research but before executing it must be evaluate under the shell and scale of the government.
On the other hand, one of the big disadvantage is that many students of private institute/organization does so many researches on several areas, specially in medicine, food and cosmetics products that directly affects to substantial part of the body in case of poor research.
To encapsulated, I believe that a good research brings an overall advantage. However, government should control all the researches and take care of the research benefits not to overlook.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29333333333 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11268531602 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5906708299 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.1 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167686492419 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703966724362 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526537761349 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102084097357 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349926118689 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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