It is sometimes argued that the internet drawbacks concerning privacy and security override its advantages. I reject this idea completely and I believe that by taking some measures the internet users can reduce its security risks.
Nowadays the internet is an inseparable part of human life; frankly the world without internet is unimaginable. Generally speaking, the internet simplifies people’s life. For example, we can buy our requirements from big department stores just by clicking some buttons. Also, you can easily check your account or even pay your bills. Furthermore, in industry we benefited from computerized machines which can be controlled by expert engineers from far distance. Personally, I believed that the internet has revolutionized medical sciences, as well. In fact, many difficult cardiovascular surgeries can be supervised or even operated by sophisticated cardiologists in remote parts of the world.
On the other hand, like any other invention, it has its own disadvantages especially regarding privacy and security of data. However, there are several steps people could take to deter cyber criminals. Firstly, people should be well notified not to trust any sources in the internet except the reliable ones which consider some rules. Secondly, in a matter of forgery or fraud they should instantly inform the cyber police. For example, I can remember vividly that once one of bank’s website was hacked but it was not later than a month that a hacker was arrested. Finally, by installing some anti-viruses and fire-walls they can diminish its drawbacks.
In conclusion, while some believed that the negative consequences of the internet outweigh its advantages, I would argue that by being aware and by applying some security considerations we can reduce its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, frankly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50714285714 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09578383467 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3881665771 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139974003635 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450096953388 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439429216367 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993348768378 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451460128119 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.