As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a view that companies are responsible for society as well as pursuing their profit. I totally agree with this opinion for the following reasons.
The main reason why I agree with the view that businesses have a responsibility to society is that they can affect people’s behavior significantly. Their products can change people’s life and may endanger an individual’s life. In recent years, looking at and manipulating smartphones while driving has been a serious problem, leading to the increase in the number of fatal traffic accidents. It is also possible to say that companies can have a considerable impact on people’s appearance. The advertisement can create an ideal image of appearance and the fashion trend. Many individuals imitate the image, which make people wear similar cloths and look similar to others.
The second reason is that businesses also have an enormous effect on people’s health. New drugs and medical devices has been developed and contributing to the improvement of human health. For example, new molecular targeting drugs has improved terminal cancer patients’ life expectancy dramatically. However, companies sometimes make a decision which may affect society negatively. Many pharmaceutical companies do not develop unprofitable drugs. One good illustration is the development of drugs against Ebola virus. This virus is extremely lethal, but companies are unwilling to develop medications for the disease because of the small number of patients, which does not bring about a profit for the companies.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that companies have social responsibility because they can have a significant influence on people’s behavior and health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55513307985 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12818011793 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8047999608 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173933185335 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587369073361 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645860711542 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117323168788 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229719868473 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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