As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been an increasingly popularised opinion that businesses should make social contributions within their reasonable purview. I completely endorse this statement for the following reasons.
Initially, charitable donations can help bolster the firm’s public image and build its brand. If a business is willingly cooperating with the local governments to handle existing environmental issues like water pollution, and constant congestion, it is likely to receive legal support from the authorities. For example, a company that manufactures wood furniture can obtain government approval to cut down trees faster. It can increase customer satisfaction by completing the work ahead of schedule, resulting in customer loyalty. Additionally, as environmental issues have become more serious, customers will alter their buying habits. The business can take advantage of this opportunity to introduce environmentally-friendly products to draw the shopper’s attention and retain them, which is essential for a financial institution’s long-term success.
Secondly, volunteering is a good chance to enhance the quality of the workforce. By volunteering, employees can gain a better understanding of each other's strengths and weaknesses, and the bond among them becomes stronger than ever, resulting in better collaboration on company projects. Besides, several voluntary works requiring specific abilities can improve the workers’ skill set. Classifying different sorts of books in the library can illustrate this precisely. The staff might be given a task to computerize the title of the books, leading to a more professional typing skill. Moreover, there are numerous workers who take time off work as they experience exhaustion and stress due to heavy workloads. The business should hold staff volunteer programs to make time for their workers to rest, and contribute to societal development simultaneously.
In conclusion, I believe that the business corporation's responsibility also includes social contributions for cultivating positive brand recognition and enhancing the staff’s productivity. It is recommended that the government apply several measures to get business corporations to alleviate social issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
...conclusion, I believe that the business corporations responsibility also includes social con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05047318612 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4421709191 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675078864353 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0368330973 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.823529412 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0777117329498 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022604170117 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320549100437 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550625248692 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283584827428 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.81 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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