As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Businesses always try to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligation that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.
On the one hand, it is obviously true that a healthy economy is an essential goal of any company. Strong finance ensures companies could cover their running costs such as employees’ salaries and payments for buildings. On top of these costs, companies also need a budget to invest in improvements and changes if they need to meet a new trend in customers’ demands. If the company lacks the money to deal with a sudden change in consumer market trends, it might lose its market share to opponents. It results in a fall in companies’ efforts to remain their success.
On the other hand, I side with those who concur that companies should have a wider role to play in society rather than focusing on maximizing profits. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well instead of exploiting them as much as possible. For example, they could have an extra money support policy for their workers such as travelling fee aid or living cost. In this way, employees might have a better quality of life and therefore this directly enhances the living standard of society. Supporting from companies at the same time strengthen the employees’ dedication and this is important to ensure the sustainable survival of any company.
In conclusion, there are many valued reasons to understand why companies give enormous effort to making profits but I believe that they should not forget their responsibilities to social contributions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04225352113 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79961243669 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0868224903 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182637504195 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604262019383 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661178136369 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123854601388 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873416453272 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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