As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While some people may argue that the main purpose of businessman is to gain a great deal of money and has nothing to do with social aid, I strongly disagree with this statement. In my opinion, every organizations or individuals which exist in a community suppose to have certain social obligations with that society and businesses are not exception. In the scope of this essay, several methods are suggested and certain circumstances are thoroughly discussed.
On the one hand, it is admitted that money-making models are not created for society’s financial encouragement, or in other words, it is not compulsory for them to help people in their community. Besides producing consumer goods, there are a lot of burden that businesses have to carry such as paying wages for employees, constantly marketing to help their products recognized or researching and developing new plans for the impending future. In this way, the profit gained from customer’s expenditure varies greatly due to the ability of the company’s CEO and market’s risks. Hence, there are several occasions when many companies have to go bankrupt .Thus, it is absolutely absurd to ask these miserable organizations give money to the poor or pay for public services if they can not even afford for their own livings. From all of the above analysing, only the manufacturers that are in good financial health can make positive contribution.
On the other hand, raising benefits should not be the sole aim of companies. In other to survive in the competition, it is a must for them to treat their workers appropriately. It is recommended to provide higher pension as a way to ensure the life quality of employees. Furthermore, it would be nice to see businesses use a proportion of their profit to sponsor charities and environment projects. Finally, instead of trying to minimize tax payment by utilizing accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through tax system.
In conclusion, I hope that businesses should focus more on social burden apart from financial objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23460410557 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12721090769 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595307917889 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5161296894 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13205783197 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397762324882 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415185664641 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800707293641 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446187638738 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.