What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in
criminal activity?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the past few years, the crime rates in our country has skyrocketed due to various
reasons. This essay will address the causes of illegal acts and provide preventative
actions to lessen the criminal activity.
Firstly, the foremost reason for the rising crime rates are illiteracy. Education is a
system that builds a base for human behaviour. It teaches them to value other human
kinds. Many families in rural areas are unable to educate their children due to lack of
awareness regarding the importance of education. They are ignorant of the fact that
sending toddlers for daily wage-based jobs does not help them to grow in an
environment where they get an opportunity to mingle with literate people. Instead, they
are exposed to a culture where chaos and quarrels play a major role and end up
becoming an assassin or a trouble maker in the society. For example, terrorists and
politicians.
Secondly, another cause for huge number of harmful acts is unemployment.
Unemployment is a position when folks are educated but unable to get a job. Rising
cost of living and poverty sometimes leads in making crime. Majority crimes are
performed by underemployed and unemployed people. For instance, the previous year
statistical report reveals that nearly 27% of the crimes committed in our country are by
inhabitants within the age group of 23 – 35 years.
However, there are numerous ways in which crime rates can be curtailed. Government
must create job opportunities for the youngsters who are educated. In addition to the
above, the ruling authorities should set a minimum salary or wage rate for each
occupation which will demolish unemployment as well as poverty. Increase in job
opportunities with good pay will also narrow down the percentage of brain drain in the
country.
Furthermore, humanity plays a vital role in minimizing crime rates. People must respect
each other and show kindness, irrespective of their occupation and wealthy position.
Plethora of crimes rises due to people’s judgemental and provoking attitude. Hence, this
can lessen by helping folks who lack basic needs.
To conclude, I pen down saying that good governance can cut down the crime rates.
Perhaps it is humanity that actually saves people from doing crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35597826087 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79480888416 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616847826087 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2647272919 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45833333333 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.38176352705 639% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130966899731 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382548525969 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356262217827 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0322505766556 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354272988183 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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