To what extent has the internet made modern life more convenient?
Nowadays, the internet is one of the most essential tools that we use in society as it facilitated people like never before. To a certain extent, I agree that the internet has various reasons that made our life more advantageous. However, I also believe that it has a negative impact on us as individuals.
It is undeniable that the method of socialization, education, and shopping variety of products has become more convenient today than in previous days. Firstly, the internet has created a way that breaks communication barriers by connecting people all over the world through social media sites such as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram. Secondly, it has not just opened the gate to global education but also serves as a source of information that helps each individual to gain learning in any aspect. Lastly, the development of the internet in society has also brought about advances in the economic sector. For example, we can save time and energy in choosing from a variety of products via online shopping.
On the other hand, although the internet indeed has many benefits in society, there are drawbacks to some extent. One of the disadvantages of this is the time allocation in browsing social media sites instead of doing the necessary tasks. For instance, some individuals tend to spend more time to face on their device rather than having a real conversation when they gather. Another downside of the internet is the computer-oriented crimes such as fraud and hacking that affects the security and privacy of an individual. However, though it may not be possible to completely eradicate these kind of crimes, people can reduce the exposure to it by maintaining an effective strategy in securing systems, networks, and data.
In conclusion, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages of the internet as it made our life more convenient in terms of social, learning, and economic aspects. With this, there is no doubt to believe that the internet is beneficial in our modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 586, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...not be possible to completely eradicate these kind of crimes, people can reduce the exposu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89804721941 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1627477427 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29597356252 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891312444376 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110100175411 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190783065153 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111756332462 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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