When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Choosing a job today becomes a controversial topic. Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the most important factor when choosing a job. This essay will discuss the reasons for my views as follow.
On the one hand, it’s undeniable that money is necessary for everyone to meet basic needs. We all use the money to support our life such as accommodations, food, bills, education, or health care. Therefore, most people consider it a priority to earn a high salary. The higher salary they get, the better their quality of life becomes. If they choose jobs based on their enjoyment or non-financial others, they might confront lots of difficulties in their living. Artists, or musicians, for instance, are known for devoting themselves to the career that they love, but it doesn’t always provide them with enough money to live comfortably.
Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are as important as money when choosing a job. Having friendly managers, colleagues, and an atmosphere at the workplace enormously stimulates your endeavor. A clear example is that if you are treated kindly and equally in your office, you will be eager to contribute to yourself. Also, job satisfaction is more crucial than the salary. This means that you choose a job not only to earn money but also to develop your various abilities and experience, even to reach a better position. Moreover, many people get a job just to help others, or to make a positive contribution to their society.
In conclusion, while salaries have a certain influence on people’s choices of jobs, I do not agree that money overweighs all other factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02105263158 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86351047021 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.362710134 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1764705882 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285134581653 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885868049709 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982000130768 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170335478401 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916373814542 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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