When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that a good payment is the decisive factor when looking for a job. I just partly agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, it is admitted that well-paid jobs help us fulfill our basic needs. More specifically, with high salaries, people are able to pay for their daily expenses, such as clothes, food, transportation, electricity bill. There are some people who choose passion over money. However, most of them have many difficulties as they do not earn enough money to manage their lives. For example, one of my friends is an artist. The low-income from painting is unable to support his family, hence, he has to work three jobs at the same time to make a living.
On the other hand, I believe other factors are equally important. First and foremost, working environment should be seriously taken into account when it comes to choosing jobs. A friendly, collaborative working environment positively affects employees and motivates them to work harder. Beside that, job flexibility is also worth considering. This factor allows people to choose the most suitable conditions for themselves without making any influence on their jobs. Working from home is a good example. It gives employees chances to work at flexible hours so that they can achieve their best efficiency. Moreover, the prospect of a job is crucial as well because it joins hands to to define your career future.
In conclusion, job seekers need to carefully look at every aspects before taking a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96414342629 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67354129394 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673306772908 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.679952291 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2941176471 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14022365359 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411310592502 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339223453447 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089678442733 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117926445078 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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