When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In these days, with highly competitive job markets some job seekers select their career based on salary level. While this may suit many people, there are more important factors needed to take into consideration.
On the one hand, the benefits of choosing a financially- rewarding job are twofold. First, a wage plays an integral part in guaranteeing an acceptable standard of living. When employees are offered a high salary, they are entitled to meet their basic needs such as buying a comfortable house or going on luxury holidays. Second, one of the best motivations behind work is a competitive salary. For instance, the head of a company may offer a regular pay rise to his employees who are able to achieve sales targets during the year. This acts as an incentive for sales staff to maximize their work productivity and enhances the level of job performance.
On the other hand, apart from salary, job seekers have different motives to choose a job. One of the reasons is that job satisfaction plays an important role in choosing a career. In fact, an employee tends to apply for a job as long as he can make use of his strengths and talents in his job and he can get opportunities to move up the career ladder. Moreover, the work that an employee does must have meanings. In particular, the employee must be able to feel that he is contributing to society positively or to a higher cause.
in conclusion, it is true that the salary is not only the factor when we pursue a career. There are others we should take them into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: In
...ety positively or to a higher cause. in conclusion, it is true that the salary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66544117647 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71461735484 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8321989327 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158017094955 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543034308573 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538129729957 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985198454022 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347119917656 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.