When choosing a job, salary is the most important decision. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people pursue a career based on the size of the salary offered. While I accept that this perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that there are other crucial aspects when choosing a job.
On the one hand, it is understandable that a high-paid occupation offers a reasonable quality of life. Firstly, it is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. To be more specific, a well-earned job helps workers cover various costs of living, which are housing, food, health care, education, and similar things. Secondly, high salaries are vital for each individual to pursue their passion. This is particularly the case for youngsters engaging in costly activities, such as traveling abroad or collecting high-end sport cars, as a way to satisfy their interests.
On the other hand, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that other factors are equally important. One reason is that job seekers should take job satisfaction and the working environment into account. This is because the amount of workload, friendly colleagues, and good managers is able to make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. Another reason is employees’ contentment may not come from the financial factor of an occupation. Specifically, people could find fulfillment in professional achievements, the skills they learned, and the value they contributed to society, rather than the money they earned.
In conclusion, while it is irrefutable that salary is an important element, I would contend that other aspects are equally crucial when considering a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25769230769 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99242386565 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.22697706 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113453531261 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391038577155 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531888794291 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910803587607 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608010634575 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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