When choosing a job, salary is the most important decision. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Wage plays a significant role during the career seeking process. While I accept that this perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that there are plenty of factors other than salary which should be put into consideration when looking for jobs.
On the one hand, an occupation with a well paycheck helps people cover the basic living expenses in their daily lives. Individuals can afford plenty of costs such as accommodation, food and bills without the pressure of saving the money. Besides, a high-paid job creates the motivation for individuals to work harder for a competitive salary. For example, an employee who has the highest achievement among others at the end of the year in a company can earn some bonus money like a reward.
On the other hand, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that salary is not only the component which individuals should focus on while seeking a job. One reason is that job satisfaction is one of the factors that decides if the job is suitable for a person or not. For instance, an enthusiastic employee would prefer a job which requires creativity and high-dynamic rather than sitting behind the front desk with the computer. Additionally, the working environment also contributes a significant impact in this process. Having good social relationships with colleagues in the workplace will motivate people to go to the office every day and will bring a positive effect to their mentality.
In conclusion, while it is irrefutable that money dominates a huge part in choosing a career ladder, I would contend that there are some other aspects which should be taken into account before making a job decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...reward. On the other hand, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97508896797 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85858841322 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8332503319 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816992068944 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283180088767 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306392141118 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512539139216 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214344080021 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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