While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both side and give your opinion
Nowadays,in our enivorment global warming is the main problem which tends to cause environmental issues, on the other deforestation also making an impact worldwide. In my view both global warming and cutting of forests are causing several damages in the environment that we live today in our daily lives.
Firstly, global warming occurs due to the increase in the of the temperature. The way we survive on earth increased the global warmming day by day. Greenhouse gases which are raised from different types of industries are involved in damaging. In other factors it develops due to the chemicals which are produced by the organisations or fertilizer companies. During this agricultural lands are also breaking down so that eventually it makes the soil uncultivated. For instance there is a farmer who developing his farmland for the last 70 years. At that time that when he started cultivation the soil likely to be farmer friendly but recent days the soil changed alot due to chemicals and gases which produced in air and this leads to global warming.
on the other, cutting down trees also an impacts on the earth. these days there is no rainfall due to deforestation, so that the cultivation is getting harder for farmers. it has several problems however, we can reduce this issue by planting trees where ever possible. The impact made several issues in order to develop foods that we eat in daily life.
In conclusion, i concur that by reducing deforestation we can decrease the global warming too. By far global warming is considered to be more ridiculous one when we distungiush between these two probelms.
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- While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world Discuss both side and give your opinion 67
- While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world Discuss both side and give your opinion 67
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also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02592592593 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81584045642 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.366284752 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243273027416 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786494927161 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623779041038 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158796880728 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659916273911 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.