Why are online classes becoming increasingly

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Why are online classes becoming increasingly

In various nations around the world, more and more people tend to join in online classes instead of off-line classes and then Vietnam is not the exception. What are reasons for that trend? Do people take part in online courses just because they like them? The purpose of this essay is to point out the causes of the increasingly of that trend.

The first and immediate reason of participating in online classes is their conveniences. Actually, people can do everything at home, so they do not need to go anywhere. Therefore, they can save time to move to classes and avoid unhealthy factors. For instance, in big cities like Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh city traffic jam often occurs that make people have to wait a long time outside, so polluted emissions are unavoidable. It is hard to people entangled in congestion reach their classes in time, but online courses’ students who can learn anytime and anywhere take it is easier. In addition, people can have more choices of course’s topics and even choose many courses at the same time. Instead of learning one course in three months in off-line class, people can choose two to three courses in the same amount of time in online class. As the result, people are easy to manage their time and flexible to arrange other works.

The more significant reason of that increasing is economy. The cost of an online class is lower than an off-line class many times. For rich people this is not worth considering, but for poor ones this is a burden to them and is a hard problem as well. Consequently, choosing online classes is a good way to solve the problem. Besides, people can learn while doing job, so they can earn money for their learning and even help their family. Because learning online is flexible about time, people can arrange time to their job properly. Furthermore, fees for transports cannot be unmarked, such as, fuels and tickets. If people live near to school, the fees do not need mention, in contrary, they have to pay a lot of money.

In conclusion, the conveniences and the economy are two main causes that people decide to join in online classes. When people learn at home, it is not only protected their health but also save their money. The fact that technology is more and more developing that make people have more chance to approach modern life and studying online is a good way to come near to that modern life, so online classes become more essential

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73067915691 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45745238541 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480093676815 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7444290115 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8260869565 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04347826087 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219000983446 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733829932419 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746544381155 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157085107337 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259460153936 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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