writing an essay comparing or contrasting living in a dorm and living with your family.
Living in a dorm and living with family are two experiences that people should try once, and I have had the chance to live in both of them. I would like to say that although there are many similarities between them, there are also some very important differences.
The first difference between living in a dorm and living with my family is the freedom. Actually, when I live with my family, it is very comfortable. For instance, I can leave home early and even come home in a late at night, although when I come home late, my parents were very worried, they just scolded me because of love. In contrary, if I do like that when I lived in a dorm I will suffer the angry of the roommates because there is a limit in time. At the same time, I cannot do whatever I want in dorm, for many people live here, and I must follow the rule of dorm. Unlikely, living with may family I can do everything, such as listening to music aloud, singing, drawing pictures and sticking everywhere I want.
The second disparity of them is that living in a dorm is more complicated than my family. Although in my family each members have their own characteristic, we are all from a origin. Everybody can live together without any conflict. However, when I live in a dorm, there are many people in many regions that make the differences in personality. As a result, each one has their own lifestyle and actives differently, and it is hard to me to adapt with; sometime there are some small quarrels occur.
In conclusion, living in a dorm and living with family include significant differences in freedom and complication. If people want to live in dorm, they need to consider carefully for this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eir own characteristic, we are all from a origin. Everybody can live together wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52302631579 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65938435329 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503289473684 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.101156709 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342337966222 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149566389596 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107732334184 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247693230831 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408538882102 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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