Few countries defend gender equality in workplace,especially working as cops or soldiers .While this is argued by a number of individuals,who believe these jobs to be more inappropriate for females.I totally agree with the later believe that,women are not suitable in certain fields of work.
To begin with,there are various reasons considered by some to think ,military and police is no exception in appointment of a women.Firstly,women are as intelligent and efficient to perform their jobs as opposite gender is.For example,statistics of results in any examinations have established that ,higher percentage of students who score good grades are infact girls ,thus from this its evident that gender does not effect the intellect of a person.Hence there should be equal opportunities disregard sex of an individual.Also, there has been no difference in annual performance of an office which has higher female employees,displaying their balanced efficiency.Therefore,considering these factors it is thought by some to empower women equally in all roles.
However,despite the above reasoning ,it is argued by a section of society that,these jobs are well suitable for men due to their physical strength and other gender related issues.It is a well known fact that men are more muscular due to their sex related genes,this gives them an upper hand in performing jobs that require a lot of hardwork such as,lifting heavy weapons,running,combating,which are crucial for a soldier or a cop.For instance,military ammunitions are as heavy as 50kgs carried by an individual soldier,owing to this it makes unrealistic for a women to carry this load and perform in battle field.Hence its not a job for women.In addition,females have issues like menses and pregnancy.These physiological processes can contribute as a deterrent in appointing them.As most women have family life and are married they have responsibilities ,such as giving birth and looking after their offsprings making it clear that,they are less suitable in certain areas of work.
In conclusion,though it is advocated by a number of people that job description should be unbiased related to gender,it is not unreasonable for others to believe that, it has some limitations in fields such as defence and police force .I strongly oppose the idea of empowering women in jobs which are dangerous.
- Some people think all young people should be forced to study full time before 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business. Rather than work for an employer.Do you think the advantages of working for yourself overweigh the drawbacks? 61
- Women empowerment in military and police 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47123287671 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.00319257094 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572602739726 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 20.2975951904 448% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 294.561538562 49.4020404114 596% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 499.25 106.682146367 468% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.25 20.7667163134 439% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.0 7.06120827912 581% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150784142131 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951602525828 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405627692788 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951602525828 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405627692788 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.0 13.0946893788 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -29.35 50.2224549098 -58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 11.3001002004 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.63 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.91 8.58950901804 150% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 10.1190380762 379% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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