Education is a powerful weapon,which changes and shapes lives of every human. Whether every child be forced until he reach age of 18 for full time studies is fervent debate. With some believing in compulsion, I totally agree to it as , it is beneficial in many ways to their future.
To begin, there are key factors for forcing younger ones to study full time. Firstly, they are immature to make sensible decisions in their lives. a 3 year child, for example, will not have a capacity to decide what is good or bad. Thus, if given a choice children will be inclined to playing and relaxing rather going to school. As parents are mature enough ,its their responsibility to guide them and lead them to right track, even if its disliked. Secondly, this deter them from getting involved into immoral and anti-social behaviours. For instance, if a teenager is not studying it is highly possible for them to get involved with gangsters and criminals,which make them naive for drug addictions and crimes. Hence,education prevents these adversities.
Furthermore,education enables young generations to secure their future. Take for example,a statistical report from University of Bradford have analysed that, children devoting their full time studying had successful careers compared to others. Thus, due to these strong implications of studying school and college it is worth forcing younger ones.
To conclude, in my opinion, education is very valuable in every aspects of life and attaining it with some pressure is worthy of the benefits such as , decent living and successful career.
- It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business. Rather than work for an employer.Do you think the advantages of working for yourself overweigh the drawbacks? 61
- Women empowerment in military and police 84
- Some people think all young people should be forced to study full time before 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...essure is worthy of the benefits such as , decent living and successful career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17898832685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96815535046 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8079512949 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144868271916 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475858778381 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567394297031 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904639360382 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509712792129 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.