The working week should be shorter and workers should have longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is obvious that people need to relaxation during their work period. According to some, believe time work should be short and they have longer weekend, while some else do not think so. I strongly agree with the first opinion and in following give you some information about my decision.
On the one hand, people should have enough time to spend their time with their families, and a very good plan for their work. Not only can this make to more focus of people on their careers and high rate of exploitation but is also, makes a sense of satisfying from their employees. For instance, in Japan employees have to relax during their work and have about four days weekend that leads to improve their economic. Hence, it is necessary to have enough time to devoted it spending with your family. But time off should not be longer than usual because the mood of people will change and they don’t have go back to work.
On the other hand, government can set legislate that every organization should have an obligatory sport day that its members playing their favorite sport game. This makes reduce the stress in members of staff because of challenging in their work and get piece of mind. In addition, when a company provide such facility, their workers ensure the company have a good attention to them. Thus, they try their performance get better and all do best to provide the task of company.
In conclusion, in every country you have to have enough weekend day to relax, recharge, and spend your time with your family that leads to more focus and performance at work and better outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68928571429 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28564453019 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4214115824 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266412957459 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984706581257 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796491275943 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174126304541 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617371407658 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.