The world is becoming more globalized, some people believe that this will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to globalization, many countries around the world could exchange their cultures. This leads to many debatable arguments related to whether the whole cultural identities of some countries would be lost or not have been lit. In my opinion, while this trend could impact on some traditional values, I do believe that it also helps to introduce these values globally.
The ignorance of adolescents in traditional values resulted from being affected by cultures from other countries is the main reason for the loss of cultural identities. To be more specific, many Asia youngsters are likely to switch their lifestyles to many western-cultures by being exposed to many commercial advertisements on social media. By doing this, some of them overlook the tradition to keep up new-coming trends, which are attractive to youngsters such as new outfits, modern music. As a result, some traditional values in the same fields would not be appreciated, so that no one wants to remain them. Therefore, many cultural identities would be lost and forgotten throughout the next generations. For instance, in Indonesia, many cuisine dishes have been forgotten or become unpopular among citizens by the emerging of many international restaurants.
However, the local governments could leverage globalization to broadcast their culture to the world. Because globalization has made traveling more affordable, tourism can be beneficial by having many foreign tourists. By adding cultural values in activities of tourism, the governments could introduce their cultures to other countries, making it prevalent. For example, Korea has successfully gained international recognition in its cultures through music and tourism. Besides, a country can learn and perceive the new cultures of others then integrates these values into theirs. Therefore, the local cultures could adapt well in the modern world, so that citizens would easily remain these values in the future.
In conclusion, globalization can harm local cultures and also gain popularity for these values.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54632587859 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04813094985 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9228874501 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183904306301 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660431648896 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346331664067 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117511485459 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380093130179 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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