As mass communication continues to grow, the world is becoming more globalized. Some people believe that this will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the growth of mass communication and the rise in globalization, many a person reckons this will decrease cultural identity in the future. From my perspective, all mass communication is a rudimentary tool helping everyone broaden their horizon and integrate the other cultures if properly manipulated by not only governments but also society.
Were mass communication not to be controlled by governments and society, it would pose a serious threat to their national culture. The youngsters at the impressionable age play a crucial role in sustaining and developing their national culture; however, with the proliferation of mass communication, they are easily integrated by other nations' traditions. For instance, some foreign entertainment shows spreading like the fire to the young generation create more trends that can impact on human’s life. This means that they will have an idea that their current tradition is outmoded and needs to be replaced by the new tradition. As the result, their culture may be decreased and integrated to foregin tradition day by day only. Therefore, without manipulating mass control may lead to the loss of culture.
On the other hand, If well manipulated, mass communication would pave the new pathway for nation’s development. It gives citizens a hand to broaden their horizon and gain deeper insight into foreign culture which they never had a chance to do before. This is to say that under- control programs which governments and society permit to widely broadcast become the greatest source of inspiration and knowledge for everyone. People may apply all their understanding into developing their life and their nation like the knowledge of economy, science, and so on which they gain from the contents of mass communication. Above all, governments and society play an empirical role in supervising mass communication so it may become the best source of knowledge for everyone without detrimental influences.
In conclusion, mass communication needs to be controlled by governments and people to prevent losing native tradition and also use it to educate not only the youngsters but also citizens.
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| 2021-09-13 | TerenceNguyen | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40059347181 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13284263185 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7859644726 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167396536555 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654137906906 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398585465996 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109842666195 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333186938293 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.