The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those times than they are now. What problems will this cause? What can be done to solve these problems?
It is believed that many towns and cities of the previous centuries’ buildings were better off inhabited by past residents rather than the modern. In my viewpoint, some significant effects can be derived from this notion along with the substantial solutions which I will explicate in the ensuing paragraph.
Looking at the considerable effects, if the historic buildings in a vibrant city still existed in the long run, it would spend on a great maintenance budget such as replacing old ornaments which heavily cost the homeowner. As a consequence, not only would individuals pose extra financial expenses but also such a building hardly meets an appropriate preservation. Moreover, this may deteriorate those living there because of the difficulty to cope up with extreme seasons. This also most likely ignites the old-material constructions to collapse and risk environmental surroundings, such as Havana’s old town killing people after construction accidents.
In another viewpoint, the answer to tackle these problems is that people should be aware before inhabiting the building, such as its quality and comfortability. When living in the buildings, they would acquire a personal connection and comfortable feeling. In addition, the government might refurbish the old buildings with the same architectural designs and function them for public places such as museums or libraries. As transformed into local heritage in China, for instance, 19th century Russian-style buildings not only attract more tourists to their historical uniqueness and value but also earn more income to the locals.
Overall, the issue of settling living in old buildings appears to bring detrimental effects such as spending a big budget on regular maintenance and risking the homeowners. Meanwhile, the alternatives are that people should be aware about the construction age and reconstruct the same preserved designs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59310344828 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12372685124 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658620689655 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3961705399 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187417022695 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623774122037 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516230196075 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109300225457 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529093329623 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.