the world's population has been increasing significantly and people are running out of water, food and fuel. What consequences may overpopulation lead to? What measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?
In this day and age, the population of the world is proven to have a considerable soar which leads to the shortages of water, food and fuel. The following essay will examine the results of overpopulation and propose solutions to alleviate the problem.
There are a lot of demand-supply problems which are accompanied by a burgeoning population. First of all, this could result in an increased demand for food, water and fuel. In particular, since these essentials cannot be produced continuously and if people keep require it on a daily basis to serve for many purposes at the same time, there will be no sufficient resources or equipment to generate them. As a result, people in some corners of the world might suffer from extreme hunger as well as water stress which increase the mortality rate. Secondly, the ecological degradation might be one of the consequences of the population explosion. To illustrate, the destruction of natural habitats for building purposes such as forests, has become a common phenomenon in populous nations. Consequently, it is possible that many wild species will be on the verge of extinction, especially endangered species.
In order to ease the burden on the rapid population growth, one of the solutions might be promote family planning. This is because people need to be fully aware of the severe influences of overpopulation and this can be done by local authorities through social campaigns. For instance, one-child policy, which aims to limit families to have one child each, should be introduced in those campaigns to help bring down the fertility rate. Additionally, a more practical and effective response towards this concern would be giving sex education to students at the young stage of their life. To make this works, educational institutions need to collaborate with their parents in providing children and teenagers with know-how to have a good lifestyle and be healthy. As a consequence, unplanned pregnancies are more likely to be prevented and therefore, reduce the birth rate.
In conlusion, it is clear that the consequences caused by overpopulation are very serious. Yet if governments are together with schools and parents to make effort, the abovementioned solutions are more likely to be feasible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21369863014 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06762952622 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1972680534 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213109833236 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067196131659 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516816152714 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133558719236 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382048235051 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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