Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays,when the environment is more technological,people usually buy something they need on the internet.
On the one hand,this kind of shopping is more convenient than going to the market or somewhere by foot. For example,you just have to search the web that you need to order,chose a product with a click, book a day that you can take and the shipper will give it to you. The popular things that many people order are clothes,books and tickets. Moreover,booking a ticket on website makes easier for a person who wants to have a good situation and doesn’t have to enjoy the crowd for the tickets. Secondly,if you don’t have credit card,you can chose pay by money when the shipper is coming.
In the other hand,internet is a network society,due to the fact that there are many the bad guys whose we always call “hacker”. For many reasons,the hackers will try to take your money on ATM if you use it to pay. Furthermore, some shops on the internet will cheat the consumers for they greediness. For instance, in Vietnam,there were many citizens had been cheated by the cheaters. They lost so much money on their credit cards . To finish this problem,the government in many countries trying to control many internet social by the way trained many secure programmers carefully. Also they are make the rules more stressful that it’s to threaten someone who tries to treat other person for their greediness. About me,when I buy something on website,the first thing I need to do is checking that shop to know the recommendation about this shop or i always chose to pay when the shipper is taking it to my house.
To sum up, I thing that we need more careful when we are going to buy something on the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, kind of, by the way, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76254180602 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94515798482 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0740607337 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201210341783 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683131326844 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431736562768 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126053009824 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154604522453 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.