whether or not computers are the most significant invention of humans has long been under excessive debate. while some individuals share the opinion that computers hold the utter influence to human, i dissent from this view because of their adverse impacts on users' health and their less vital role im comparison with other human inventions.
admittedly, the appearance of computers brings the world certain upsides. first of all, computers provide human with an easy access to worldwide knowledge. in this day and age, individuals can conveniently look up for reliable and helpful information of every disciplines, from every corners of the world just by a few clicks on the computers at home, which greatly assists people in broadening their horizons without much efforts. a further point to discuss is that computers offer a great memory which is able to systematically store a big deal of data and grograms. thanks to this, individuals and coroporations are enable to save and find data precisely and effortlessly, which facilitates daily office works and vital projects of all fields.
on the other hand, i am firmly convinced that computers do no play the most substantial role among human inventions. firstly computers may act as a catalyst for a large number of physical and mental illness that jeopardize individuals' well-being. children who indulge themselves in computers, for instance, can get addicted easily, and thus spend hours sitting in front of the screen being full of bluelight, thereby carrying higher risk of obesity and myopia which severely compromise their health in the long run. another point to make is that there are obviously many more crucial interventions, compared to computers. one prime example is the exploration of the alternating current in the year 1887, which is believed to be the strong and solid foundation of later inventions, including computers. in other words, if there had not been the appearance of the electric, computers and a myriad of other electric appliances, such as washing machines or cooks, would not have been invented, inhibiting the world reaching its full potential.
in conclusion, despite giving simple and free access to an enormous amount of information and offering clear data storage to people, computers are not the most profound human inventions due to their serious effects to individuals' health as well as the lesser role as opposed to other inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86735577241 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7032452973 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.785714286 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132421794544 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461663875482 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255537650835 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805532196375 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117165603722 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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