Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of
trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in
their spare time.
"Are leisure activities affected by trends and fashions ?" has become a controversal questions for the past few decades. Some people hold the opinion that hobbies are the mirrors which reflect exactly trends. However, some others oppose that opinion. Personally, I strongly concur with the first view. And this essay will present why I think so.
First, trends are made very often, especially with the rapid development of social nowadays. Since they are called "trends", they can affect many people, which means numerous individuals follow those trends. The clearest example is that in the past, children used to play dolls, skip the ropes or play hide and seek in their free time. But now, we rarely see them playing those games. Instead, they often surf the Internet or join Tik Tok, which is now one of the most well-known app. This shows how great trends impacts our spare time activities.
Moreover, most of people are afraid of being lonely. Just imagine there was a trend which was followed by a large amount of people, However, there was a guy who did not follow it. As a result, he was left out of the crowd. Since very few people want to be like that, people will try to catch the newest trends. So in some friends bonderings, they can have more things to talk with others, as they share the same interests. This is also a reason that trends do have big influences on people's hobbies.
In conclusion, I subscribe to the view that people's hobbies are strongly affected by trends since trends are created regularly and people are usually scared of being left out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...s our spare time activities. Moreover, most of people are afraid of being lonely. Just imagin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82481751825 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.451989855 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8329662244 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4444444444 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135897483487 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368809194994 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410370316864 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773721908221 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234692923381 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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