Write about the following topic.
To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The rapid increase in the world population brings a shortage of food consumption in the future. There are types of approaches to reach this issue. But some people prefer to use insect-based production for a meal, in an alternative way. Although, some people don't agree that insects are not appropriate for meals causing health and environmental issues.
The most beneficial point is consuming insects may address the global starving problem. In some emerging market countries, especially African countries people, are living lack of food and water. We can provide them with insect-based preservation products, which will be cheaper than beef or pork. Because insects are everywhere around.
On the other hand, safe consumption is in question. Some people think eating insects is not healthy because the bacteria which is in the gut of insects are not good for the human body organism. Furthermore, some unknown diseases may spread which are caused by eating insects. For example, Many people believe that COVID-19 occurred due to eating a bat. Even though scientists find out edible insects, harvesting them is also a problem. Because of its small size, harvesting edible insects will harm nature.
Finally, I believe that I can't use insects in my meal even if they are edible. I am sure that scientists or food technologists will find a solution to the shortage of global food sources. Growing insects for food production will be followed by far more dangerous consequences in the future. The new pandemic diseases and unrenewable nature disasters may be derived by taking insects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an alternative way" with adverb for "alternative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...use insect-based production for a meal, in an alternative way. Although, some people dont agree that ...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... alternative way. Although, some people dont agree that insects are not appropriate ...
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Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hich will be cheaper than beef or pork. Because insects are everywhere around. On the ...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...harm nature. Finally, I believe that I cant use insects in my meal even if they are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.203125 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77997688558 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.366542534 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362056337488 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101067038853 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658221737505 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21280112965 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027614961578 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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