Write a descriptive essay about a place that is familiar to you.
Every person has reasons to be proud of their hometown. As for me, Quang Tri province is not only engraved in my mind for its fascinating history but also for an excellent library where I have always been heading for whenever I need to refill my energy. Tri Thuc library is such an ideal place for academic and relaxation purposes.
In the first place, it is common knowledge that for local residents, Tri Thuc library is the best destination to conduct educational activities. It is a large five-storey yellowish building with the lowest two intended to display books and the other three for doing research or other similar activities. On entering the first two floors, visitors will instill a peaceful feeling looking at the navy blue walls and bottle green bookshelves in which books are systematically classified. People of all ages come here to either sit or stand being engrossed in their favorite items, which range from domestic course books to international journals, from comics to novels and so on. In the highest three floors, there are students doing homework or research in such a quiet atmosphere that even a sneeze may distract people.
Another important point that needs to be made is this library can also serve recreational purposes well. To make it clearer, there is a coffee shop and a statue painting corner specially designed for readers to give them relaxing time. While the coffee shop, which is always full of slightly rosy perfumes, attracts mainly adults with a wide selection of beverage, the spacious statue painting corner, with its colorful setting, is most appealing to children and teenagers who like creating things. Moreover, people in general are pleased that Wi-fi connection signals in Tri Thuc library are usually strong to pick up.
In summary, the combination of educational and entertaining activities available in my favourite library really does a good job in reminding people to balance their life, hence making it an ideal place to visit.
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- Do you think using computers in class bring advantages or disadvantages? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, well, while, as for, in general, in summary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07598784195 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67304102595 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632218844985 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7548598259 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.461538462 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0283029518978 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0118674045429 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220305931318 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0204469100256 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145863976235 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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