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Today young people tend to be discouraged by failures, negative thinking, and giving up. If you are one of them and you don’t know what you need, you can try reading the book “THINK AND GROW RICH” by author NAPOLEON HILL. Those profound philosophies and positive lessons on lifestyle, thinking will help you. So, in this essay, I will review that great book and recommend it to you.
“THINK AND GROW RICH” is one of the best-selling books about teaching people to be rich and it is loved by a lot of people, especially our young people. “THINK AND GROW RICH” is known for the name “The 13 Principles of Getting Rich”, it was written by Napoleon Hill and was published for the first time in 1937 and is fast famous. That book is very popular not only in the past but also in the present and in the future, it sold over 60 million copies with over 100 languages in the world.
Why “THINK AND GROW RICH” is famous? Because of its content. The special thing about this book is that it includes 13 parts with 13 different rules to being rich. Writing by fact stories from the life and lessons are easy to understand, will help the readers from surprise to different surprise. Thirteen rules that the author wrote in this book are Desire, Faith, Autosuggestion, Specialized Knowledge, Imagination, Organized Planning, Decision, Persistence, Power of The Master Mind, The Mystery of Sex Transmutation, The Subconscious Mind, The Brain, and The Sixth Sense. Throughout of 13 parts, readers can see more clearly about life's philosophy and success. Moreover, they will have a lot of experience and you will notice that success or failure depends on each of us, the way you think will impact your result and your success. That is the light point of this book.
Is “THINK AND GROW RICH” convincing? Yes, it is. The content of the book is very convincing and moving. The book not only helps you better understand the secrets of success of famous names such as Edison - a brilliant inventor whose training time in school is only 3 months or like Henry Ford - who was considered uneducated but has become a tycoon in the car industry with a huge fortune but also of many talented people in many different fields who have succeeded with starting from nothing. That is a great book for those who lost their belief in themselves and for those who want to find a road to success. For me, “THINK AND GROW RICH” is the best selection, it helps me know what I need and what I do. In conclusion, it is also a great book which I’ve read.
Above are the reviews of "Think and Grow Rich". This is one of the Self - Help books that you should have in your bookcase. This book is really convincing, and it gives you a lot of experience that normal people have to lose many years to get. Reading with many people is to be easy to sleep but own with "13 you think rich, enriching", making you up to 5, 6 hours to read all the books. Certainly, each of us to read and read many times to understand almost completely, Napoleon Hill wants to convey to us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Today young people tend to be discourage...
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...at great book and recommend it to you. “THINK AND GROW RICH” is one of the best...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... Why “THINK AND GROW RICH” is famous? Because of its content. The special thing about...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...une but also of many talented people in many different fields who have succeeded with starting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 549.0 315.596192385 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6102003643 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55652787533 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0019186793 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7407407407 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139015197861 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433607658325 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451560546223 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804883008582 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328601535995 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.