Write an essay (at least 250 words) on the following topic:
School should be a safe environment for learning and developing, however, school violence seems to be increasing. Where does this problem come from? What should we do to change the situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, school is widely thought to be a safe environment for students to study and develop. However, school violence is probable to occur increasingly. This essay will go over the origins of violence at school and solutions which could reverse this trend.
Chief among the origins of this problem is from parents. That is to say, they have a tendency to pamper their children too much, and endeavor to find out an explanation to defend their offspring when they make mistakes. As a result, the children began to count on their parents, and scold their deers at school without fearing the consequences. For instance, recently, there has been violence at an international school in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam. More specifically, a female student ran the other eight students down due to personal reasons. Nevertheless, that student did not feel faulty and took what she had done for granted. Thus, through this lens, it is understandable why school violence is becoming universal.
Another contributing factor is schools. This is because teachers have an intention of paying too much attention to the lectures which are based on the main textbooks, they do not teach their students how to behave standardly in the society on a usual basis. Therefore, students hardly form a role behavior and are effortlessly ill-behaved. By way of illustration, it has been statistically proven that approximately 90% of students who are accustomed to violence do not receive perfect education about behaviour and attitude towards other people, especially their deers. Thus, this example also clearly debunks the reason why there are a great number of increasing cases of violence at school.
There are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the problem described above. Firstly, perhaps the most effective method of addressing this would be for the family. Parents should change their way of treating children, be extremely strict with them, and not forgive them effortlessly regardless of their big or small faults. A second measure would be for schools. They ought to organize a reservoir of activities for students. Hence, they can strike up new relationships and get on well with each other, forget about violence.
In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in short term. However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in short, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1432160804 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81827239214 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597989949749 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8710855502 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3043478261 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04347826087 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270722681333 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733673538475 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627639549645 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143143725037 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801682665261 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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