In recent months, we have been witnessing a new fatal virus which has spread over the world and has infected more than 100,000 people. Although this virus derived from mainland China on December last year, Vietnam has been also affect on several fields of life. Being in this circumstance would create certain drawbacks, but there will also be some advantages
It is precisely clear that the novel lethal disease brings a number of crises for humans’ life. To begin with our lives are being confused, for example, instead of coming back to school, students just stay at home and learn from their laptop or smartphone. It is an extremely difficult situation that many students live in the rural or remote regions where have not wireless, so they cannot join online classes. Many teachers may have struggle difficulty learning how to teach and manage their students through the Internet. Moreover, a huge range of businesses and stores are seeing a drop in customers, because of fear over the virus outbreak. They even closed their shop because they cannot be able to pay their rent and employees, so people who lost their jobs will get several troubles on their life. Lastly, by virtue of travel restrictions and closing borders, agricultural products could not be exported, for farmers who bear a suffering heavy losses. As a matter of fact, the novel virus outbreak is disseminating crises and chaos in many places.
On the other hand, there are some obvious advantages that would arise. First, numerous innovative ideas and initiatives were generated during isolation time. For instance, new sort of bread which was made from dragon fruit, and rice noodles were made from melon. It is beneficial for farmers to make a profit again. Besides, citizens are more likely to stay at home than go outside, a number of garbage as well as smoke from transports will be decreased. Lastly, students have a big chance to learn more knowledge from this time. This ‘retreat time’ help them to realize the self-study attitude, and they can learn a new subject from it like how to protect themselves from virus.
In belief, the coronavirus epidemic is creating a mixture right now. It brings us a lot of mishaps, but there are several good lessons to learn from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...cember last year, Vietnam has been also affect on several fields of life. Being in thi...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...cember last year, Vietnam has been also affect on several fields of life. Being in this c...
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Line 3, column 953, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'los', 'loss'?
Suggestion: los; loss
... for farmers who bear a suffering heavy losses. As a matter of fact, the novel virus o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, sort of, as a matter of fact, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93455497382 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47786865346 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599476439791 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6757957192 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2105263158 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68421052632 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139844439326 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410263564064 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417003266222 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800746791116 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399677960979 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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