You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Governments should spend their money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Train has been a more convenient mode of transport throughout the recent years, and has been favoured by the majority of the people. This essay strongly agrees that the government should put forward their earnings towards the renovation and the construction of the railway systems rather than on roads. This essay will depict the reasons for favouring this opinion.
To begin with, trains have gone through the process of evolution from the old coal-powered trains to electric-powered trains which ,nowadays, use the electricity as the greener form of energy. In other words, they do not contribute towards the production of greenhouse gases in air that in turn result in global warming as well as air pollution. As a result, this will reduce the amount of carbon dioxide emissions annually all over the world that can be expressed in a short sentence ''reducing carbon footprint''.
Moreover, trains are more convenient and suitable for the ordinary citizens when commuting to work particularly when jobs are in far away workplaces. To explain, the railways are constructed underground in the subway stations far away from the traffic congestion on roads. Likewise, they have the shortest routes when linking different towns. Consequently, this will dramatically reduce the time taken when searching and waiting for the local taxis or buses at the sametime saving time for the benefit of the citizens as well as reducing road rages.
All in all, I believe that a good decision like this should be taken into consideration by the authorities to solve the issue of the traffic congestion in our country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16091954023 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81794449974 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4938962185 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151042444016 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590436106547 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749517365932 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09367053719 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735305468522 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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