You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, the number of people who reach out online and communicate virtually rises exponentially. Although digital hangouts outpace face to face interaction, the use of social media brings many advantages to our modern life.
The use of social media help us build intimate relationships. Remote communication via social media is essential to combat loneliness and feelings of isolation.As a result, they can pull others closer to their genuine emotions and have somebody really understand them, especially, when they are sad, and they want to rent that feeling onto others just to get it off their chests. Moreover, previously it took a lot of work to write a letter, address, stamp and envelope then take it to the mailbox and spend a huge amount of time to wait for somebody's reply in order to keep in touch with somebody having a far distance from you. For instance, during closure because of covid-19 outbreak, we are still able to talk together about what you have done during quarantine time through the tablet screen or even find new friends who you can place your trust on and confide to them about whatever deep in your heart.
The flexibility and accessibility of social media benefits telecommuting and those who seek for the education which they do not have to go to the brick and mortar school. First, having the internet-enabled computer or not has a sweeping influence on children's prospect. For instance, online lectures given by well-trained educators help school-goers who stuck at home owing to corona virus totally can keep pace with their peers. Second, the firm implementing telecommuting will undermine their the burden to the environment. Commuting to work generates a huge amount of fumes from motor-cycles and motorized movements which causes atmospheric pollution and institutes a health hazard.
Although many people who are conservative believe that social media makes the traditional way of communicating wane, the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages. The growing number of social media users is inevitable, we should put this development to good use in order to make our life more relaxed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...at loneliness and feelings of isolation.As a result, they can pull others closer t...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
...nuine emotions and have somebody really understand them, especially, when they are sad, an...
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Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...in order to keep in touch with somebody having a far distance from you. For instance, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, then, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19308357349 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93359867953 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616714697406 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5176990323 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.615384615 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21850186727 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691220535076 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068730155408 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134973763437 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667573639597 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.