You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Animals from fly to mouse and monkey, are widely used in testing and developing new drugs. They are very important and crucial for allowing scientists to learn about human organisms and how the body reacts with drugs. Should scientists use animals in the lab rather than on humans directly? According to this, this essay will show some reasons and explanations for using lab animals.
Animal testing contributes to life saving cures and treatment. To illustrate, the Californian biomedical research association states that in the last 100 years every medical breakthrough has resulted in research using animals. So they play a vital role in medical research. It helps in treating some major conditions such as brain injury, breast cancer, childhood leukemia and more. Moreover, involving animals in manufacturing and testing new medicines has improved scientist’s understanding of human biology and health.
If we didn’t use animals, we would have to test new drugs on people. Animal testing ensures that vaccines are safe. For example, scientists during coronavirus were racing to develop a vaccine to set up an end for this pandemic. In addition, they used genetically modified mice to ensure that the vaccine doesn’t make the virus worse. Also, a professor from Flinders University in Australia said “testing a coronavirus vaccine on animals is absolutely essential and skipping that step would be fraught with difficulty and danger”.
Animals themselves benefit from the results of testing. To clarify, vaccines tested on animals have saved millions of them that would otherwise have died from a lot of diseases, for example, rabies,distemper and tetanus. Moreover, using animals in drugs saves some kinds of animals from being extinct. A lot of associations and organizations endorse using animals in testing not only in human treatment but also in developing medicines for animals themselves.
To conclude, animals are here for humans to use. They helped humanity to know the human body and understand its biology and health. Also, it ensures the effectiveness and safety of any new treatment and vaccines. In addition, testing on animals improves and helps them from many viruses and from being extinct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd explanations for using lab animals. Animal testing contributes to life s...
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...rstanding of human biology and health. If we didn’t use animals, we would...
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...ing a coronavirus vaccine on animals is absolutely essential and skipping that step would be fraught...
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...m a lot of diseases, for example, rabies,distemper and tetanus. Moreover, using animals in...
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...ping medicines for animals themselves. To conclude, animals are here for hum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41547277937 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85747921741 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8926461524 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9090909091 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8636363636 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213739348295 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712283167708 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428819802174 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129953356606 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436837099755 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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