You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways.
What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is considered that there is a huge difference between kids and adult behavior. Some people think that children and adults are not alike. While other people think that getting older affects a person's act and social life. In this essay, we will discuss both points of view and my personal conclusion.
On one hand, it is evident that growing up changes the person's social experience. Kids won't be able to communicate like adults. For example, adult society is wider and bigger than children's zone. Hence the belief, adults meat a lot of people and characters, and note that kids' social life is just around school and family. Plus that parents look after their children's, It is clear that they know a limited number of humans and that what life teach us.
On the other hand, there is much difference like when older people see someone for the first time they focus on the good impression, unlike kids. It is considered, that adults try to show confidence and to maintain the good impression. But, kids don't. Adults meet new people almost every day, plus that they know human behavior and types. In addition, this extent change has to happen either you like it or not, that's life and part of growing up.
To sum up, after a careful analysis and looking at both points of view, I believe that growing up causes this transmission, and it doesn't mean growing and changing cant take us to better place and affect the person's social behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71541501976 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2825257073 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.686479985 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192993695975 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669162615502 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497898070717 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116825817322 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452722951077 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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