You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Write at least 250 words.
The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In recent times, the steps of science-technology have had a major contribution for the development of society. While there is a school of thought that the significant machs of medical science might be considered as the highest position for human’s living for two hundred years, I hold an opposite opinion that those breakthroughs could contain some drawbacks towards human beings, as well.
Without any doubt, a range of serious diseases have been prevented or even completely wiped out in the flow of history. For example, humans are likely to curb tuberculo, which used to take many lives all over the world in centuries. Thanks to medical breakthroughs, the human’s average life expectancy might be remarkably increased. When it comes to modern medical interventions, humans tend to be better treated and faster recover in comparison with the traditional methods like curing by herbs or acupuncture. Therefore, it would not be denied those advantages in our life that medical marchs have brought for.
Having said that, those majority of medical advances might also lead to thousands of negative sides. It is said that the more developments of medical science would be invented or created, the less humanitarian people might have. With ethical beliefs, more and more animals such as mice, rabbits would be used to experiment or test not only on harmful medicines but also on painful medical treatments. Furthermore, the medical developments might lead to biological warfare which would no longer destroy all human race. If the developed nations’ authorities implement medical science to launch meaningless wars without limitation of any country’s border, they would put an end to human’s history.
In conclusion, medical science would obviously play a crucial role in human’s development in the community. Its applications which are not kept far away from potential crime should be employed in order to enhance human’s life to achieve wealth and prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this majority' or 'those majorities'?
Suggestion: this majority; those majorities
...hs have brought for. Having said that, those majority of medical advances might also lead to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36655948553 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97139166602 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620578778135 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.173580701 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849657382175 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331944881433 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0174704224117 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577142449205 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100032839952 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.