More and more people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering,computing and medicine.Some people belive that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor countries.Other feel that this only part of the naturalmovement of workers around the world.
*what is your opinion?
*Do you think rich countries should pay poorer countries for the people they encourage to come?
*What other measure could rich countries take to encourage qualified people to stay and help develop their own countries?
should write at least 250 words.
Brain-drain is one of the major problems in the globalized world countries.Most of their educated professionals migrate to the rich countries for better job opportunities and salary.Most of the rich countries are ready to hire educated professionals from other countries by paying much money than their country.Do you think it is a kind of stealing?
Most of the poor nations are paying less salary for their professionals.The educated job seekers have not enough vacancies to build their career in their country. Furthermore, the opportunities and benefits from developed nations tempt them to fly and find a job.In general, ambition for a sound future is the main factor for this brain-drain.
However, majority of their income flow to their motherland.This trend helps the undeveloped countries to build their economy.For instance, majority of the developing countries receive a huge amount of foreign currency from abroad from the experts who work there. Isn't it a good solution to increase the foreign currency in the national treasury? Most of the third world countries encourage their masters to get a job in the international sector.The richest nations have spent huge amounts of money to pay the foreign masters. Therefore, wage for the poor nations for encouraging their qualified people to stay and help the developed countries are not practical.
Anyhow, the developed nations should tighten the immigration rules and criteria for the admission of professional to prevent more brain-drain from the poor nations. More flow specialist professionals than any other professionals will create a big shortage of specialist professionals in that country.
In conclusion, moving workers from one country to another country is a natural process.This is not a kind of stealing.Creating more job opportunities and paying better salary should tempt the professionals to stay in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, third, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50170648464 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24968088649 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488054607509 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6436319571 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.2 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215048992545 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893193608 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564430386018 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125162651022 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391902956651 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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